Shuggerlain 0.2211/20/2023 Dynae: his attempted casting failed to stablize => stabilize.Yraselle: I command you to stop and release my dad! => my father.Yraselle: Pyrus!! Retreat, now! and realease my dad!! I command you => release my father (typo, and "dad" is really weird in this context).Nulkan: This seems to have started at the same time as Drascys' assasination => assassination.Yraselle: Araxian influece has been like a noose => influence.Nulkan: A Political marriage? Why? Isn't that a bit outdated? => A political (lowercase P, yes I'm a nit picker).Luth: He was Drascy's right hand for many years, and something tells me he's the real force behind Drascy's assassination => Drascys' (twice).Saraith: Yes sir! => Saraith? Shouldn't this be just "soldier", or something similar?.Dynae: (after rejecting Nadine): Well, nadine told us about this => Saraith told us about this.Saraith: Even though I'm happy to see you two aren't lossing your time, heehee.Wave 3: they see Tregor running away with some of their man => with some of his men.Misha battle: I carry her and pay for her to have a room to spend the night in in another inn.As soon as she lays on one of the tween beds => twin beds.=> And I must say Tregor won't be able to do anything. "feran Girl" => "Feran girl" or "Feran Girl" (3 places).=> It's not that I am regretting anything (2 t's, no "of") Dynae: It's not that I am regreting of anything.Saraith: Dynae is a great archmage, but also very beatiful, isn't she => beautiful. The demon girl imbues some kind of magic unto me.
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